A Meme, to keep the juices flowing!

[phantisma]

Pick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any fanfic I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

Sometimes, when I'm working on longer fics, as I am right now, I need a wee bit of distraction...so...I borrowed this wee meme from havenward